Storyboard Planning

For my storyboard planning I wanted to do 2 different short drawn storyboards to show my 2 film opening ideas. I still haven't decided which I want to do, I may just try both and see what looks better if I have time, but I genuinely have a very good idea of how I'm going to shoot them and I think they could be very good.

My first film opening idea is about Chloe heading to the park to see her friends and there is a few hints that there is a man "Mike" there just because he wants to be wherever she is and watch her. His obsession takes over and he kind of revolves his life on trying to be close to her. With the music and shots, I wanted to make it an uncomfortable video that portrays his feelings just by his face and emotions. This will also give a good start to the whole film because he won't approach her in this scene, he will just be introduced and the audience will understand what they are getting themselves into.

My second story idea is something very similar to my actual life and i actually got this idea when I was leaving work late at night and there was this black van there and I realized how scary the area actually looks. As well as driving down South Post  Rd. in the car by itself I always get the urge to look into my rearview because there is never any cars near me since its late. Pretty much this storyboard is more scary than the first one, but the film opening would start with Chloe working as a cashier and mike comes in tells her she looks pretty today or whatever and you can tell there is weird history there and that she's weirded out by him. It will transition to her closing and cleaning up and she either gets out of the door alone or with a coworker but heads to her car when she forgets her keys and runs back to the restaurant. When she comes back out, Mike has disappeared from the view since she never saw him and he was watching her from behind this big dark car and as she is driving she looks into her rearview and she sees his shadow. It will obviously be produced to be scarier than it sounds, but im stuck on which idea is better.